In this Bella is in biology when she smells blood and feels faint. She then leaves to go to the nurses office when her and Mike meet Edward. This is in Chapter 5
GREAT job! Your story not only had a beginning, a middle and an end, but had interesting camera work and a nice mood for the scene. Your editing and camera angles for the “woozy notebook paper POV” looks RAD. The dialogue over black was a really nice and effective choice for that moment. It would have been nice to see some of your creative editing/camera work in the second half, but overall your execution was great and your scene really stood out.
Comment by Kayla Keith on April 29, 2009 at 11:15am
Good video of 'blood type' scene; nice ending
Comment by Debra Petitt on April 22, 2009 at 11:36am
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